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My entry for 
's contest. [link] . I accidently got the deadline wrong, so I ended up having to rush a bit. I like the outcome of the overall picture, I had some trouble with the colour scheme but I like the design.
'She is a quiet and timid maid, who does what she is told without a single word. However despite her lack in communicating out her opinions, in her mind she thinks really deep and meaningful thoughts, she just doesn't voice them out...'
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's contest. [link] . I accidently got the deadline wrong, so I ended up having to rush a bit. I like the outcome of the overall picture, I had some trouble with the colour scheme but I like the design.'She is a quiet and timid maid, who does what she is told without a single word. However despite her lack in communicating out her opinions, in her mind she thinks really deep and meaningful thoughts, she just doesn't voice them out...'
Feedback Appreciated!
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I admire your digital drawing skill. I love Vienna's figure and vivid colours you used. Details as laces, folds or her eyes and nose are beautiful. Your gentle shading is perfect. I like it especially on navy textile.
I wish you gave an example of her quiet, significant thoughts. Knowing characters' personal view of the world and motivation make me love or hate them. And so: willing to spend time with them. Furthermore I miss Vienna's backstory in description or more setting details in the picture. I see her rather as neat character's appearance design than a design of a person who will been involved in the action of a story.
I have already known reason: space for my own facts. Unfortunately I find it too wide to be inspired. Though the picture itself is well executed, pleasant and has its charm.
For me: Vision 4*, Originality 3*, Technique 5*, Impact 3*, Deviousness 4*
I wish you gave an example of her quiet, significant thoughts. Knowing characters' personal view of the world and motivation make me love or hate them. And so: willing to spend time with them. Furthermore I miss Vienna's backstory in description or more setting details in the picture. I see her rather as neat character's appearance design than a design of a person who will been involved in the action of a story.
I have already known reason: space for my own facts. Unfortunately I find it too wide to be inspired. Though the picture itself is well executed, pleasant and has its charm.
For me: Vision 4*, Originality 3*, Technique 5*, Impact 3*, Deviousness 4*